Here are my latest comic sequentials, based on a sample "Ghost" script from Dark Horse Comics by Randy Stradley.

Just letting everyone know, I am available for commissions to work on your comic! Note or email me for rates.

The dialogue for the story is below.

------------------------------------------------
by Randy Stradley
PAGE ONE
Panel 1
1 MAN (weak): HELP!
2 CAP: HIS CRIES ARE WEAK … HIS VOICE BRITTLE WITH TIME AND HOARSE FROM DISUSE. NOBODY WILL HEAR HIM.
Panel 2
3 CAP: HE RUNS, BUT HIS OLD LEGS CAN’T CARRY HIM FAST ENOUGH, AND BESIDES, THERE’S NOWHERE HE CAN RUN…
Panel 3
4 CAP: …THAT THEY CAN’T FIND HIM.
Panel 4
5 CAP: I’D HEARD ABOUT THIS. THEY CALL IT “CAR TAG,” “BUM HUNTING,” OR JUST “THE SPORT.” THE CHILDREN OF ARCADIA’S ELITE STEAL A CAR AND CHASE A HOMELESS PERSON UNTIL THEY RUN THEM DOWN.
6 CAP: SO FAR, THE POLICE HAVE FOUND NO LEADS. BUT I HAVE. IT’S AMAZING WHAT SOME PEOPLE TALK ABOUT WHEN THEY THINK NOBODY CAN HEAR THEM.

PAGE TWO
Panel 1
1 CAP: AND IT’S FRIGHTENING WHAT SOME PEOPLE WILL DO WHEN THEY THINK THEY CAN GET AWAY WITH IT. THE VIDEO CAMERA IS A NEW
TWIST.
2 CAP: THAT OLD MAN ONLY HAS ONE CHANCE … ME.
3 TITLE: GHOST IN DEADLY GAME
Panel 2
1 CAP: HE CERTAINLY WON’T GET A REPRIEVE FROM THE PAIR IN THE CAR.
2 CLIFF (from car): WAIT’LL THE GUYS SEE THIS!
3 BRUNO (from car): HOLD THAT CAMERA STEADY! DON’T MISS ANY OF THE ACTION!
Panel 3
4 CAP: BUT TO REACH HIM IN TIME, I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING I USUALLY SAVE AS A LAST RESORT.
5 CAP: I HATE TO DO IT, BUT I HAVE TO JUMP SPACE.
Panel 4
6 CAP: I CONCENTRATE…
Panel 5
7 CAP: …AND I’M GONE.

PAGE THREE
Panel 1
1 CAP: BUT WHERE I’VE GONE TO IS STILL A MYSTERY.
2 CAP: THE DEMON WHO CALLS HIMSELF “CAMERON NEMO” SAID THAT THIS PLACE EXISTS WITHIN ME … IN MY MIND.
Panel 2
3 CAP: IF THAT’S TRUE, IT MIGHT EXPLAIN WHY TIME HAS NO MEANING HERE…
Panel 3
4 CAP: …AND WHY SO MUCH OF MY – ELISA CAMERON’S -- PAST MANIFESTS ITSELF IN THIS PLACE.
Panel 4
5 CAP: OF COURSE, I’M ASSUMING I CAN TAKE NEMO AT HIS WORD.

PAGE FOUR
Panel 1
1 CAP: IT COULD BE THAT WHEN HE TOLD ME HE CAME FROM THIS HELL -- WHEREVER THIS PLACE IS -- THAT HE WAS LYING … TRYING TO PSYCHE ME OUT…
2 CAP: …MAYBE IT’S EVERYONE’S HELL.
Panel 2. Flashback
CAP: WHATEVER THE TRUTH MAY BE, THE FACT IS THAT I’M THE ONE RESPONSIBLE FOR LETTING NEMO LOOSE IN THE WORLD.
Panel 3
CAP: ENOUGH OF THIS. I CAN’T AFFORD SELF-PITY…
Panel 4
CAP: …I CAN’T BACK AWAY FROM THE FIGHT …FROM THE JOB I’VE TAKEN ON.
SFX: BLAM! BLAM!
Panel 5
CAP: TIME TO GET BACK TO IT.

PAGE FIVE
Panel 1
CAP: A SECOND’S CONCENTRATION…
Panel 2
CAP: …AND I’M BACK. NO TIME HAS ELAPSED.
GHOST: DON’T WORRY. I’VE GOT YOU.
Panel 3
BRUNO: WHAT THE --?!
CLIFF: WHERE’D SHE COME FROM --?!

PAGE SIX
Panel/tier 1
CAP: THE RED “RECORD” LIGHT ON THE CAMERA IS LIT. GOOD.
Panel/tier 2
CAP: THIS WILL ONLY TAKE A SECOND, BUT I WANT THEM TO GET IT ALL ON TAPE.
Panel/tier 3
CAP: I WANT THEM AND THEIR FRIENDS TO BE ABLE TO WATCH IT OVER AND OVER.
Panel/tier 4
CAP: I DON’T EVER WANT THEM TO FORGET WHAT HAPPENS WHEN PEOPLE TRY THIS KIND OF THING IN MY TOWN.
GHOST: RELAX, OLD TIMER --

PAGE SEVEN
Panel 1
GHOST: -- YOU’RE SAFE, NOW.
Panel 2
GHOST (OP): THEY’RE NOT.
Panel 3
CLIFF & BRUNO: AAAAAAAHHH!
Panel 4
SFX (only if necessary): KRASH!

PAGE EIGHT
Panel 1
1 GHOST: WHEN THE POLICE GET HERE, TELL THEM TO WATCH THE VIDEO TAPE IN THE KID’S CAMERA.
2 GHOST: AND TELL THEM I SAID TO GIVE EACH KID A COPY OF IT -- AFTER THEY’RE OUT OF JAIL.
3 MAN: Uh, SURE … WHATEVER YOU WANT…
Panel 2
4 GHOST: LISTEN. THERE’S ONE MORE THING.
5 MAN: Huh?
Panel 3
6 GHOST: GET YOURSELF A GOOD LAWYER. WITH THE EVIDENCE THAT’S ON THAT TAPE, YOU’VE GOT THE MAKINGS OF A CIVIL SUIT THAT WILL GET YOU OFF THE STREETS, AND THEN SOME.
Panel 4
7 MAN (quiet): TH-THANK YOU.
8 CAP: HIS VOICE IS WEAK, BRITTLE WITH TIME AND HOARSE FROM DISUSE. BUT I HEAR HIM JUST FINE.
9 BOTTOM CAP: THE END.